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Old 08-21-2007, 01:00 PM
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In the third paragraph on the history page you have:

"Originally their was an icebox cooler" - It should be "there", not "their".

In the first paragraph of the section "Dutch Roots" - "herman" should be capitalized.

It was great reading the history of the store!
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